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©2004-2009 ~dtobi
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Submitted: April 20, 2004
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Comments: 26
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I took this image over a year ago. The feedback on "black gold" and the other images of the factory series encouraged me to submit it.

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Nope. I think it's a damn cool shot! I like that the plants are green with life while the factory is all greyscale and industrial. perfect title.
Great! :)

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It is a nice theme!!!

I like the sky.... it is like the cheminy is in the sky.... ah... I am not able to say what I want....

French: J'ai l'impression que la cheminé va percer le ciel qui est trouble.. voilà ce que je voulais dire.. :boogie:
Ah yes, the perspective is great and as ~ramiusraven said the plant which is full of life is also colourful, whereas the boring drab factory is lifeless and hence greyscale. Great editing, must've taken a while!
The composition is also interesting because you've centered the chimney, nothing wrong there ;)
The only suggestion I can make is perhaps use the clone tool to get rid of the white sign on the door (my eye keeps being drawn towards it, perhaps because it's the brightest area)
Cool stuff :D
very good!
the only thing I can think of to improve is removing that white thin like somebody mentioned

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I will change that... Thanks for the help! Well seen!
Done. Thanks for the comment!
Really cool shot- love it.

Ciao!
~Mince
Cool shot - love the contrast between the green and the grey.

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